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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-06-24 05:58 PM

Summer's Thirst

So hot this day,
as thoughts and words mix
and the dripping of feelings
whet my appetite for a Summer of you.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-06-24 09:11 PM

Maureen darling girl YOU are a superb writer my friend and this is utterly stunning in its brevity and sensuality

Fabulous writing Absolutely excellent I love the lines and the construction you really have expressed so much in this. Excellent absolutely wonderful Utterly utterly perfect I love it

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-06-24 09:23 PM

Wynter~
Your words drip the desire~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-06-24 09:23 PM

(smiles) Oh Maureen, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I feel such gorgeous desire shine in your words, this is lovely, may your summer be filled with smiles, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!