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Open Poetry #22

No Mistake

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-02 01:22 AM

No Mistake

you wondered
if it
was
a mistake
no
no mistake in
my deed
no mistake in
my heart
in how
I feel
in what
I know
in who
I am
in what
I need
No
it is
no mistake
you possess
as much
of me
as I do
and that
is
no mistake

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-09-02 02:27 AM

Make no mistake about it, your poetry is straight from and to the heart.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2002-09-02 10:36 AM

another strong statement

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

3 posted 2002-09-02 12:12 PM

love is not a mistake... nor right or wrong... it just is..

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

4 posted 2002-09-04 01:52 PM

I don't think you ever make a mistake
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2002-09-05 08:36 AM

no mistake that this was enjoyed.

nicely done.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2002-09-05 12:19 PM

1derful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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