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Open Poetry #22

A Distant Dance Renka

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-09-02 08:30 PM

three million light years away
far above,
in another galaxy

Andromeda stars.
a whirling waltz
in cobalt blue

far below,
on the earth
autumn leaves dance in the wind.

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-09-02 10:29 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love the comparison in this, sweet friend, I truly believe you can compare the autumn leaves here to Andromeda! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-09-02 10:43 PM

Nice contrast...like the simple style of this...powerful colors. ThisDiamond

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-09-02 10:45 PM

Beautiful description.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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