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Open Poetry #22

Red Shoe Dawn

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-08 09:06 PM

Red Shoe Dawn

this morning
I woke
to find
you
sleeping next
to me
in all
your splendor
and I
clicked my mind
three times
and realized
I was home

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (09-09-2002 10:48 AM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-08 09:14 PM

Oh I love this. Reminds me of "Wizard of Oz".

Cold hands means a warm heart

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

2 posted 2002-09-09 07:23 AM

The question I have am I the straw stuffed one or the metal man.
I could even be the one that says Put um up put um up!
Thomas

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-09-09 09:18 AM

Oh Helen!!
I absolutely LOVE this!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-09-09 09:23 AM

Helen,
Was the trip mental of physical? LOL enjoyed

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2002-09-09 09:49 AM

Well done, indeed

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2002-09-09 09:59 AM

Helen...poetess...now you know this one is headed for my library!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2002-09-09 10:23 AM

Yes, yes, very delightful "splendor!"

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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