| Open Poetry #22 |
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Written Wanderer |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)
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Wriiten Wanderer I am lost in the pages that I write be it day or night I sit and type in this maze of words to win her and whisk her away with quick wit and play giggles return as my poems are read I wonder is she lying in bed She leaves little hints as a possible game But her words do not light my way so I stumble in the dark and pray that I find my way I am not great explorer of grammar nor can I nail pronunciation with a verbal hammer But my need to please this Mysterious angel lifts me to meet my fears so I plunge deep into this literture to win my conquest or at least give it my best just so I can quiet this pounding heart in my chest |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Uplifting...the journey of love is confusing and wonderful...I have always found that the brightest light came from my own heart. ThisDiamond |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
"In your quest I see you are armed well, I see no reason why you should fail gee now I just wish someone would bring forth some poetry to this bleeding heart..need not be perfect its the thought that counts! ![]() Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Yes, love is always worth fighting for and I wish you all this joy of your own! (big hugggsssss) I can feel your yearning in this, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
in your journey...a candle will help you find your way...look to that light...helen |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Oh My sweet Helen How you brighten my path with your wwonderful words ![]() |
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