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Open Poetry #22

Thin Ice

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-29 02:29 AM

Thin Ice

tonight
I skate
on
thin ice
with
dull blades
will they
suffice
and I
am nowhere
near
the shore
and
with all
this slipping
what
am I
standing
for

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-09-29 02:32 AM

standing so you don't fall down.....

thoughtful poem

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-09-29 03:04 AM

Hey you...I wrote one similar, with one of my favorite songs in mind--by Jethro Tull, and this IS pure poetry, as is your mindset of the same subject:
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/jethrotull/skatingawayonthethiniceofthenewday.html

smiles to ya, Helen.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2002-09-29 03:09 AM

thanks

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