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Open Poetry #22
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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2002-09-29 07:31 PM


Is this a hand to you, empty remained.
The tears flow freely for you, sustained
Slowly pounding a heart, not mended
Hope in a soul, dying, silently, disturbed

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)
© Copyright 2002 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-29 08:13 PM

DJD~ this reads so painfully sad....I hope all is well with you
Miss T. Eyed
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2 posted 2002-09-30 10:26 AM

Such a very intense, and sad poem, but at times we need to express the feeling inside, so we can free ourselves of the pain. You did a great job expressing within this poem. Thanks for sharing it here
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