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Open Poetry #22

Brian the stripper

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

0 posted 2002-09-30 06:10 PM

Another dreaded repost from some time last year, I was writing a sequel to this called "the return of brian the stripper" but it has evolved into a different beast.
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In the ties of conquest
One word of bliss,
stray whispering lips
for a love-left listless.
Through cranks and cracks
the big bone
makes its scene
lumbering in little shacks.

Brian the stripper
Crawling naked up the walls
Place a dollar where you last left God.

Don't need an alibi
to taste the dance
or thread hairline trance.
Analgesic infants defy
A cradle credence unbroken
hard labour
For powdered saviour,
Mortuary poetry is last words spoken.

Brian the stripper
He is a coming
Through the door.

Don't drag the orchestra into this thing
Rattle those sticks, rattle those sticks
The sound is beautiful, its perfect!
The birthday party

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2002-09-30 06:13 PM

Very cool write. Thanks for the read.

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

2 posted 2002-10-01 01:23 PM

Thanks Miah.

Don't drag the orchestra into this thing
Rattle those sticks, rattle those sticks
The sound is beautiful, its perfect!
The birthday party

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