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Open Poetry #22
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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2002-10-07 01:29 PM


Uncovered

does my breath
give me away
for next to you
I tremble
it is something
I cannot control
around you
I disassemble
what is
this strange thing
it is you make
me feel
next to you
I cannot catch my breath
and each time I find
it harder to conceal

I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.
© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2002-10-07 01:33 PM

What an inviting piece

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.
Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
2 posted 2002-10-07 01:42 PM

Very nice,
But why would you want to be concealed?
When the presentation is so lovely

Gloom
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-10-07 01:54 PM

I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart
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