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Open Poetry #22

Grey sky (haiku)

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2002-10-08 07:01 PM

Slate grey sky
Cold rain falling down
Hiding the tears

paladin

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-08 07:02 PM

I like it

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-10-08 07:03 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Robert, I know this feeling all too well, sweet friend, I hope all is alright now and these tears have escaped your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-10-08 07:19 PM

Searching for only
one clear puddle, I'll find my
rain-drenched reflection...

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

4 posted 2002-10-08 07:24 PM

Thank you for the seynru.You sould writ more of them.

paladin

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-10-08 07:37 PM

gray's white light
deeper than the rain
thunder's sane

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