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Open Poetry #22

Sad fish (haiku)

paladin

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since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2002-10-08 07:03 PM

Beneath the waves
Salt water abounds
Do fish cry?

paladin

[This message has been edited by paladin (10-08-2002 07:04 PM).]

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-08 07:04 PM

Yes yes I like this

Cold hands means a warm heart

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-10-08 07:06 PM

Maybe they do paladin..maybe they do. Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-08 07:11 PM

fish cry in balance
with the whales barnacle song
mingled compassion

(sigh) This is very well-said, sweet friend, I too believe like us they cry too, sweet friend, I really do, this is wonderfully contemplative, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-10-08 07:20 PM

So...you have thoughts
like that, too...

Good!

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

5 posted 2002-10-08 07:21 PM

Noah:You should write more haikus.You show a remarkable talent.

paladin

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-10-08 07:25 PM

Diving...

Gulls tear at salmon
clouds swimming against silver
currents of sunset.

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

7 posted 2002-10-08 10:02 PM

This was very good. I do enjoy Haiku much, but I've never been able to write it much myself. Good work!
-Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

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