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Open Poetry #22

Candle Light (haiku)

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2002-10-08 07:08 PM

Candle light glows
Flickering dimly
Hope remains

paladin

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

1 posted 2002-10-08 07:13 PM

Let's hope that little flicker is enough to keep us on track.

One of the better haiku's I have read lately.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-10-08 07:13 PM

a flames one last breath
burns persimmon in soft might
an ember of God

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

3 posted 2002-10-08 07:19 PM

Yes Paladin...as long as the flame of hope burns ...the human soul is kept warm and alive...nicely written

...believe what your heart feels.....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-10-08 07:21 PM

Luminous silence...
only color filling the space
between night and day.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-10-08 08:19 PM

Flickering
little light glowing
hopefully

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-08-2002 08:20 PM).]

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