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Open Poetry #22

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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2002-10-09 12:12 PM

           is like

a woman's neck
                slender shoulders

exquisite
             delicate
hidden strength

      in a
            graceful
       supple
   form

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-10-09 12:14 PM

YOU...

...wrote

a...

...

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2002-10-09 12:15 PM

As always

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

3 posted 2002-10-09 12:17 PM

uh...
*one of those blushing thingies*
thank you Karilea and Anne

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2002-10-09 12:49 PM

if this is me
and

   Iamyou
  then
this
   must be
       you?

and I KNOW a keeper when I see one!

(no one saw that)

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

5 posted 2002-10-09 12:52 PM

Nicely done, Brian!

Simple and effective!!!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

6 posted 2002-10-09 01:55 PM

Applause!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-10-09 03:35 PM

Have you two dueted yet?
If so,
why not???????

squiaz

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2002-10-09 03:43 PM

um...well OF COURSE!

but it just seems...private...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-10-09 03:46 PM

Beautiful...love it!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2002-10-09 04:52 PM

How beautifully this slipped down the page...excellent. ThisDiamond

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

11 posted 2002-10-10 11:11 AM

Mmm Hmmm.

I seem to know this, somehow

~Ed

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