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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Suddenly shhh don’t say a word every word I need to hear today I have already heard silently just let me listen to the sound of your breath any distraction now could certainly cause it’s death and I need to hear a rhythm pounding sweet within the sounds of your tender heart in beat suddenly a magic moment has occurred and all without a single word I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
Wellll now. This is very nice. I know the feeling well. Heard all I need to hear, dont say a word. Nice and sensual. Tom  |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I like this. Pat without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, this is very good poetry. Very nice and romantic. I like it very much. Thanks. Love To All, Ethel |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - very inspiring, and very nice... BC |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
here is only a deep breath - I wrote a rhyme reply,,, but i guess someone deleted it without even telling me Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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