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Open Poetry #22
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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
0 posted 2002-08-20 01:40 PM

After So Long
I too will say goodbye to a life without God
but once the roses thorny arms lift to pray
I know this poem will be so true

As God begins to seek my soul
As I begin to walk his waters
Lost but now found
A new person I am

I never knew I could be so wrong
an openning of doors
a new beginning
a forever
when never is present
a never when forever cannot be seen
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
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1 posted 2002-08-20 07:55 PM

I really, really love the first 2 stanzas, but I get confused the last part of the 3rd, can you help me?

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.
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