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Open Poetry #22

Moment of Pause

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-10-11 11:59 AM

It is the moment of pause
I miss.

That time out there on the road
when thoughts of delivering the load
were gone from your mind
and in a moment of reflect
I would detect
your stare.

There,

within your eyes
I saw, with soft edges
the image of myself.

Smudge of carbon on my face
weary from the day

yet veiled,

seen through your eyes
a prize, beauty in pause
without any flaws.

It is this, I miss
the sight of me
through love laced eyes.

whiteRose

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (10-11-2002 12:00 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-11 12:12 PM

This poem makes me miss my liam.

I don't know when he is getting back from Calgary. Good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

2 posted 2002-10-11 12:35 PM

This is very sweet and loving.
Enjoyed the innocense of this heartfelt realization that comes inbetween the frantic moments of everyday reality.

Much enjoyed thank you for sharing.

SimplyGold

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-10-11 04:28 PM

Wistful memory so poignantly expressed.

EA

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

4 posted 2002-10-11 05:31 PM

Beautifully done...love laced eyes...the only way to see one's true love..

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