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Open Poetry #22

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-08-28 07:08 PM

All

you
are all
I ever need
no reason
to look
further
in explore
when I
discover
one surprise
you
reach out
to give me
one more

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-08-28 07:35 PM

1slick_lady
That is one slick write. Excellent.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-08-28 08:04 PM

Awesome!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-08-28 09:33 PM

helen - as always...

BC

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-08-28 09:42 PM

Slick, THIS is just how it should be!

Just keep on gettin' those surprises...

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-08-28 09:46 PM

Excellent as usual

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

6 posted 2002-08-28 09:54 PM

I like those surprises too, Helen...
A very nice write...

~ surprise chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2002-08-29 04:35 PM

Surprise!

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

8 posted 2002-08-30 11:57 AM

but was it a ncice surprise
arthur

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