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Teen Poetry #6

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Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

0 posted 2002-12-16 09:57 AM

Shiny
new
and
unsurpassed.
A symbol
of the life
we will one day
share

"I keep looking, looking for something more." Sara Evans

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

1 posted 2002-12-16 09:24 PM

elegant in its simplicity Jenn. ^^
congratulations dear. hope it all goes well.

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

2 posted 2002-12-17 07:17 PM

I liked this! You did very well!
*Allison*

"O My love
Please don`t cry
I`ll wash my bloody hands
And well start a new life"
-Good Charlotte

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2002-12-19 04:40 AM

Short, simple and sweet, this is a very enjoyable read

Andrew

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-12-28 04:06 PM

Jenn~
Simple, yet beautiful.
Very nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

5 posted 2002-12-28 09:19 PM

Short and amazing (thought I was gonna say "sweet" didnt you? haha). I really liked this one a lot. Great job!

*Me*
I'm pasteing my smile back on just to please you... I always knew Elmer's glue was good for something...

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