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Teen Poetry #6

No Title For Love

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

0 posted 2002-12-26 11:15 PM

I say that I
love you and
you say it
back.

I mean it when
I say it-
do you?

The love I have for
you is that of a
child.

Love is too
powerful for
me, especially
when with you.

I don't know how
to put this, but
my love is different
than what it should
be.

My true love will
come with time, by then
I will be able to know
just how love works.

~The title that is there is the title. U always end up having trouble with Love and understanding it so I thought this might help me...did it? 'Course not!~

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2002-12-27 12:15 PM

I really like this one too, and Im not just saying that either lol. Im going to steal something from othersideofthemirror for a moment, "Keep writing, and I'll keep reading."

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

poeticpower
New Member

since 2002-12-27

Posts 3

2 posted 2002-12-27 12:40 PM

Very nice..I love it..

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-12-28 12:11 PM

WindSong~
Some nice thoughts here and you've penned them well.
Nicely done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

4 posted 2003-01-22 05:35 PM

I'll try not to ramble this time, k?

lol. I liked this, I know how that feels, it pretty much charachterizes one of my past relationships, well, 2, actually. Anyway, great poem!

*~Rich~*

Too strong to give up, to weak to move on....

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