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Teen Poetry #6
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LTEvans
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since 2002-12-06
Posts 72
Lenham, England
0 posted 2003-01-02 10:47 PM


Some call them,
Lords of listless verbal maiming,
Masters of mangled verbiage,
Princes of phonetic blunder
Kings of conceptual conundrum,
Principals of problematic custom.

I call them,
Politicians.

Solipsism saves us from the atavism of the Equalitarian.
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clve527
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since 2002-07-08
Posts 200
1 posted 2003-01-02 11:53 PM

I think that you may have something interesting to say here, but the overuse of the comma made it too broken up to have an impact.

Casey
chester
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since 2003-11-01
Posts 11
2 posted 2004-05-14 09:00 AM

I found this excellent in content, a soft and slow sting is often even MORE painful.
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