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Teen Poetry #6

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WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

0 posted 2003-01-14 07:16 PM

I was in Math today, as I am everyday, and I wasn't able to pay attention..though I still understood the material...go figure. Anyway, we talked about reflections so on the opposite side of the page, I wrote a few poems. I want to post this one up because, I dunno...Yeeeeeeeeep. See ya.....Math is awesome! hehe....
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See the star shine,
look out across the water.
The shine of your eyes
is seen by many.

A star twinkles.
It's winking.
Another one shoots
across the sky.

The moon shines making
your smile visible
only to those around you.
A shallow wind blows
as you exhale your pain.

Look down, see your
reflection, don't let if fade.
let us hold that memory of
forever.

*Mistakes are made, you pay for them, then you do it again.*
~*~Love doesn't make the world go 'round, it just makes the ride worthwhile~*~

[This message has been edited by WindSong (01-14-2003 07:17 PM).]

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-01-14 09:41 PM

This one was really really good! I liked it alot! Especially the last two stanzas, Great job!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

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