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Teen Poetry #6

the one i usse to love

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2003-01-15 02:47 AM

you are the one i used to love
you were the one that kept me safe
you were the only one that was there
you are the one i used to love

you are the one i used to love
we used to talk all the time
we used to be close.........
you are the one i used to love

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-01-15 02:50 AM

Robin~
Hi there...great to see you posting again.
There is such a deep sadness in your words.
I felt every bit of this as I read, and it touched my heart.
Very nicely penned.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (01-15-2003 02:51 AM).]

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2003-01-15 05:44 AM

Wow... Robin... beautifully done

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

3 posted 2003-01-18 01:07 AM

Very well written. Love fades, people move on, life goes on, eh? Thanks for sharing

      - Cody -

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