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Teen Poetry #6

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rOxXbabY391
Member

since 2002-12-14

Posts 71

0 posted 2003-01-18 02:18 PM

I'm so mad I can't explain
But not at you
I'm going insane
I hate this crap
It's really old
So I'm keeping my feelings in,
Bein so bold
Gotta be strong
Though it won't last long
I know what I feel
I can't hide it, that's true
I just need some time.
To get over you

"I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right."

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

1 posted 2003-01-18 02:25 PM

A good vent, Emily.

Poetry is always a good way to vent or let loose feelings and pain and everything else.

The poem is on the shorter side, but I think that's what you were going for, so it works.

~Titus

"A life unexamined is not worth living."
-Socrates

Missthang
Member

since 2001-07-03

Posts 103

2 posted 2003-01-19 12:26 PM

Awww...break ups are tough. But as you said, time does wonders. Take care.
-AB

"Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it.
Whatever you are feeling, love yourself for feeling it."
-Thaddeus Golas

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

3 posted 2003-01-19 01:02 AM

kool, i like the strength of this poem. it's not all whiny that you're broken up and whatnot, and it's not melodramatic and whatnot. just basically a 'yeah, we broke up. i'll get over it' deal. good stuff *thumbs up* lol
-bergundy-

"crack my head open, on your kitchen floor. to prove to you, that i have brains." -Alkaline Trio

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