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my 600th post lol
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my 600th post lol |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Just to let you know I will never let go of what you said no more tears shed Cry me some more Because I don't care anymore Cry me some more Because I won't deal with it anymore All I need is time as my anger slowly climbs With nothing left to say I just want to run away Cry me some more Because I don't care anymore Cry me some more Because I won't deal with you anymore... This is my 600th post..yeah I know, its nothing to really celebrate about, but I forgot to do it on my 500th post..lol so..tell me whatcha think If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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Trouble Breathing Member
since 2002-11-12
Posts 63 |
I like it..nice and simple. Sometimes people tend to try to get way to detailed, and it can get pretty boring, but you definetely didn't do that here. Not a bad poem by any means.  |
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Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
It's a good poem simple..yet thought provoking..Good Job Jenn **Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life** |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
This was really great! I loved it. (its going in my library )Take care, and keep writing! --sara |
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AJMGW Member
since 2002-11-19
Posts 57Galaxy Roller Rink |
short yet unique. good job! i liked it. 600 can I count that high? LOL!!!! ^*~AJMGW~*^  |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thank you all, I'm glad you all enjoyed this. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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