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ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
This world is more than I can conceive Problems are growing at an alarming rate So confused, don't know what to believe Walking down a path that brings my fate Dropping to my knees I wonder why Can't there be peace of mind Almost want to breakdown and cry Alone in the world, walking blind Now I see what was out of sight Guess I was being ignorant before Always negative, which wasn't right So much inside me I couldn't ignore At times I wanted to walk away Hide from the problems inside me Stood up, dealt with it my way What life has for me, i'm ready to see |
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SweetGhettoFlurt Junior Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 15Milw,WI |
Tight poem. I thought it wuz aight. *~*[email protected]*~*Marie*~* |
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straindmind New Member
since 2003-03-24
Posts 9MI, usa |
it sounds to deal a lot with what is going on in the world and above. |
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SixtiesChick03 Junior Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 49NV |
I really liked the poem...keep up the good work |
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