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Teen Poetry #6

A Confusion

wings of the moon
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since 2003-03-27

Posts 323
Pink bubblegum land

0 posted 2003-03-27 10:55 AM

I cannot see through this glass.
The blue fuzzes and blinds,
bound me to its lines,
linear perspective that shines,
sideways,
what a spectrum!
And It falls and echoes till a willow,
a whisper of chaos should fall at last, centred circle. Duty’s sake…
the pink of the soil soiled and spoiled,
a buttercup blessed on a boot
that lifts with monotony…I can see…
Senses still changing, gyrating, the laughter uncontrolled of the screech of the wheels,

he’s left.

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2003-03-28 11:54 AM

Hi Claire

As always, you spill your feelings with such flair. This poem is superb dear friend, simply an incredible write.

wings of the moon
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 323
Pink bubblegum land

2 posted 2003-04-22 03:03 PM

Thank you sweet Rose for your kind words :-)
I missed you :-)

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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