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Teen Poetry #6

Crazy

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
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0 posted 2003-03-29 07:32 PM

Heard this song-
on the radio this morning.
Sugary vocals,
lamenting strings.
Echoed your name in every verse-
whispered to me a simple refrain:
You understand more than you think
you comprehend far more than you know.
Soon to find that missing link;
just close your eyes and let it go.
And as I sit,
I think to myself-
I must be crazy,
to think these things.
How could I survive?
Love is strong,
but money talks-
and you have to pay the rent.
Miss Spears was right,
about one thing:
When you're 'not yet a woman',
you're too damn overprotected.
And I look at my parents,
just to say-
This little girl,
needs to be-
free.

Tabitha LeAnn
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since 2003-03-27

Posts 50
Kansas, USA

1 posted 2003-03-29 08:10 PM

Wow!!! I LOVED YOUR POEM. I REALLY ENJOYED READING IT AND I FELT I COULD RELATE. KEEP ON WRITTING I'LL LOOK FORWARD TO READING YOUR WORK.

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
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2 posted 2003-04-10 12:20 PM

I really enjoyed this Jenn, I'm not sure I like it as much as some of your other peices but I guess that's just me being awkward. Anyway thank you for sharing this, I enjoyed reading it

Andrew

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