| Teen Poetry #6 |
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Tru Luv |
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Chloey Member
since 2002-09-29
Posts 74in a silver mustang convertible |
I luv the way you make me smile And the way you make me laugh You treat me so good I wouldn't choose another path When your far away I alwayz wish you were near When I'm all alone I alwayz wish you were here Your alwayz on my mind I think of you all day I really do love you No matter what you say I write what I feel and I feel what I write. |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
i really like this poem. voted |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
hey, I really liked this, i can relate to it very well. good job. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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Chloey Member
since 2002-09-29
Posts 74in a silver mustang convertible |
Thanx! |
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Chloey Member
since 2002-09-29
Posts 74in a silver mustang convertible |
OOOPS!!! I wanted ta say thanx to everyone who voted for muh otha poem which is gettin put in the book! It is called Normal Again! check it out! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Chloey, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, and may this tru luv always fill your heart! (big hugggssssss) This is a true gem perfect for the book, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chloey, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
this is so good it got my vote Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
I really liked this one...and I can relate to it as well. Nice write! |
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