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Teen Poetry #6

don't let me go

Lindsay
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 59
South Dakota

0 posted 2003-04-13 10:28 PM

I use to think that life wasn't worth it
I wanted to give up
But you have showed me how great life can be
You gave me a reason to keep going
A reason to get up every morning
You helped me find myself
Who I really wanted to be
You brought me out of darkness, and into the light
And now, I know how lucky I am to have you
And I never want this to end
I never want us to break up
I want to be with you forever
Want to spend the rest of my life in your arms
Because I know I'm safe there, nobody can hurt me or bring me back into darkness
I don't want to be there again
So please, Don't Let Me Go!

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

1 posted 2003-04-17 03:12 PM

good work!! Way to show emotion

karebear07
Member

since 2003-04-15

Posts 64
Texas

2 posted 2003-04-17 05:56 PM

Kudos, That was awesome. You really let your feelings come out and thats what poetry is about!!
-Kara <><

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