| Teen Poetry #6 |
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Hunted |
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karebear07 Member
since 2003-04-15
Posts 64Texas |
I look into the purple of when it hurt. The black of bruises everywhere from all this verbal abuse. I bleed these tears upon my soul, my heart cries out for release from it all. The grasp it has upon everything I disown is so tight that I’m glad I cried it to its end. I run away from it all because the daggers of my mind are obsessed with haunting me. Disturbing silence has us all in a bind. We all fight to get out of the closed encounters of the dripping decay of our lifeless bodies. Turning around slowly that way I won’t be scared. The faces press their sharp teeth through my skin, nagging at me until I drop from all the insanity. Voices are wrapped around me. I shake my head and scream in terror of the blackness that blinds me. All I see is the blood stains from the past haunting me. By: Kara Melton <>< |
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Peacebri Junior Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 44 |
WOW! That has got to be the best one of yours ive heard. I totally understand you and get where this comes from... Peace! Bri |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
I agree with Bri...I think that is quite possibly one of your best! The imagery in that was absolutely fantastic!!! It's a shame you didn't consider it for the book, that one would have definetly made it! Beautiful job! I love it! As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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