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Teen Poetry #6
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tornskirt
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since 2003-03-30
Posts 87
0 posted 2003-04-19 10:56 AM

pinch me
is this real
pinch me
i don't feel
anything

pinch me
i am gone
it's too late
to pinch me
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OtherSideOfTheMirror
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since 2002-12-19
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1 posted 2003-04-19 11:07 AM

short but meaningful. not bad.
SilentTears
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
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2 posted 2003-04-19 11:11 AM

It's a little short...but has meaning to it, just like Otherside said...not bad. Keep posting!

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tornskirt
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since 2003-03-30
Posts 87
3 posted 2003-04-19 11:14 AM

thanks guys, i have other poems... just look around!
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