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Teen Poetry #6
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SimpleDiscourse
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since 2003-04-24
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0 posted 2003-05-03 11:11 AM


Broken prose
       turns to verse.
                Juxtapose:
      the better and the worse.
[everything feels so real
        contrived
once written

down.]
© Copyright 2003 Erin Reynolds - All Rights Reserved
chasing rain
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since 2001-05-15
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1 posted 2003-05-04 05:02 PM

A Writer's Woe-

I'm surprised that this hasn't gotten any replies yet, because this piece, though short, reflects what a poet truly feels. I'm impressed by the subtlty of your words, and the strong realization behind it. Simple and to the point. Loved it. Keep writing!

Leah
JP
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since 1999-05-25
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2 posted 2003-05-04 05:16 PM

Clever! Very well done.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
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SimpleDiscourse
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3 posted 2003-05-05 01:02 PM

Thanks.
FlyingCloud
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A little place inside my head
4 posted 2003-05-05 05:55 PM

I'm surprised at how few replies it has gotten...Well, it has mine

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)
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