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Teen Poetry #6

gone bye tomorrow

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

0 posted 2003-05-06 05:20 PM

**This was origonally written as a song**

so close.
i know.
too close.
i'll let go.
you're so oblivious.
i'm crying on the inside
as you laugh
with my smiling face.
All this will be gone by tomorrow
Give back everything I ever borrowed
Blame it on my internal sorrow
Look into my eyes
I am so sorry, now.

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

1 posted 2003-05-06 05:45 PM

This is good...

Very well done!

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

2 posted 2003-07-07 10:56 PM

this was just part of a song i was working on... it's really nothing much and it's kind of weird

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