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Teen Poetry #6

Stringer

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

0 posted 2002-10-08 02:29 PM

I sit crying after you have stung me
Your stinger lingers in my wound
Although you are dead and gone the pain still stays in me
I clutch it closer hopin your venom hasn`t gone too deep
Overpwering my weak system
I can`t handle all of this pain
Just make it go away...
I itch my skin with nails that rip it apart
Just like what you did to my heart
Please be my antidote....

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

1 posted 2002-10-08 10:41 PM

I felt every word.

Isn't amazing how such a small creature can be such an inspiration.

(Are you aware that your title is 'srtinger'? thought you might want to fix that.

)

~Sara

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

2 posted 2002-10-10 09:22 PM

Ummmm. How exactly do I change the name? I have no idea how. lol

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

3 posted 2002-10-27 08:14 PM

wow! I REALLY LIKE! LOVE SIS

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2002-10-31 10:30 PM

aww...to change the name you just go up to member's Area/Help and Change Profile, if you're doing multiple posts...but otherwise, you just delete the feilds on the Reply screen and work with that

The poem was amazing..loved the whole stinger and antidote thing, you wrote this really well.
Thanks for sharing, your sister seems to like what you do

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