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Teen Poetry #6

The Ultimate Taboo

aran
Junior Member

since 2003-05-18

Posts 34

0 posted 2003-05-18 05:23 PM

The Ultimate Taboo

Her eyes: a shadow
with light behind.

Light beyond the darkness;
a forests choked by trees.

Her face: a shadow
with light behind.

Light so dark it saps my soul;
life so fleeting--to blink is taboo.

And it is thought that blinks the eye
while it blinds its very own soul.

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

1 posted 2003-05-18 08:03 PM

very nice poem

"Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up; these are the best days of our lives"

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

2 posted 2003-05-19 10:36 AM

It is a good poem.

I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so.

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