| Teen Poetry #6 |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I can’t get away from it all, Nothing is as it seems. My silent tears began to fall, But in my head I hear the screams.. He holds my heart in his hand, I hope he doesn’t let it go. But what I don’t understand, Is how he doesn’t even know. Something’s wrong, I can tell, But he keeps quiet and won’t say, What’s been putting him through hell, As it slowly takes him over, day by day. I can see it in his eyes, I can feel it when he shakes. But most of all I see the lies, And how his heart breaks. But what’s in his gorgeous soul? What’s he made of? What makes him whole? How does he find love? As for myself, I do not know, I’ve been hurt more than my share. I once knew love.. a long time ago.. But to talk of that.. well..lets not go there.. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. [This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (05-29-2003 05:21 PM).] |
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SCREAMIN Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 51US, Tx |
That was REALLY - and I mean REALLY - good! Wow!! I am at a loss of intellegent words. But soft, what light through yonder window break. It is the east, and Juliet is the sun... |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
LoL, Thank you, I'm glad you liked this. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
I already read this...and I could read it a hundred times over again. Really great job with this one! As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Oh yes, I like this. Esp how ya ended it. Good job! ~Jess ![]() "What I am is good enough if I would only be it openly." |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
Unnnhh... Woah. I feel inadequate. *sits in silence* -Lioness |
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