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Teen Poetry #6

Can you see?

LuckyFelix
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 34
Here.

0 posted 2003-06-02 07:25 PM

I told you.
I knew what was to happen,
and as I recollect...
Your blindness will be your downfall.
You can see, now, eh?
Tell me, what do you see?
You see what I do,
and with your downfall comes my uprise.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-06-05 11:22 PM

ooooooooo....very cool write

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

2 posted 2003-06-06 09:55 AM

I like this...this is a very expressive poem. Nice job!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

3 posted 2003-06-06 01:25 PM

Good write hun...

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2003-06-06 06:48 PM

Whoa, very powerful piece.
Great job!

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

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