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Revival of things long gone
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Revival of things long gone |
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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
The reverb of your words resurrecting emotions I killed the first time you spoke them The sound of your steps opening doors in my heart I locked when last I heard your steps trail off The warmth of your body rekindling the heart I froze when that warmth faded away The thought of your return awakens the giant within I coerced to sleep when you walked away from us |
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LegalSecret69 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 69Virginia |
This was really good....I'm not sure I understand ALL of it, but it was nice to read.... Good write. Keep it up! "Secret" |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"The reverb of your words resurrecting emotions I killed the first time you spoke them" That's a good line, and it's the first line.. So I read the whole thing, and that was all just as good as what I read to begin with.  Lovely. |
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