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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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I'm just here and you see through me one day so pretty so bleak the next- all I do is focus on you and on how I should act and what I should say your idea of caring is saying that word the slick moving L seeping in through skin the thinner the better I always say and you think it's enough to keep me waiting- maybe I don't want to anymore. Maybe I'm tired of the game. Sorry so scattered- venting. |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Wow...I like this. I really like the style you wrote it in...and how you went back and forth from like "I say this...you say that" type of thing. Nice work. As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
and you think it's enough to keep me waiting- maybe I don't want to anymore. Maybe I'm tired of the game. Grr... lemme at him.  you wrote what I feel. It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
quote: Heh I just loved these lines, they are so wonderful and original, great writing  Andrew |
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