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Teen Poetry #6

The Storm

LegalSecret69
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 69
Virginia

0 posted 2003-06-17 12:43 PM

As the rain falls,
the quiet sky becomes lonely,
and the clouds turn gray, from blue.
As my heart calls,
I become lonely,
and I realize, I'm living life without you.
As the lighting strikes,
The earth becomes loud,
and everything turns very black.
As my tears are streaming,
and my heart is screaming,
I realize I want you back.
The storm is so violent,
it's quickly tearing things apart.
No one can realize that most of this storm,
is all taking place in my heart.

laurie
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 153
canada, ontario

1 posted 2003-06-17 02:17 PM

wow, secret. l like, though it's a little awkward to read... great metaphor...

laurie.

topsyturveychick
Member

since 2003-01-19

Posts 57
Bris,QLD,Aus

2 posted 2003-06-17 09:30 PM

Hey, really cool poem. I like the whole theme of the storm. It's really cool.

I asked God how much he loved me...
He said this much...
And streched out his arms and Died.

**Sunshine**

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