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Teen Poetry #6
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LOSTinTHISworld
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since 2003-06-01
Posts 94
canada
0 posted 2003-06-17 04:33 PM

I just want someone
To love me
To tell me they care
Someone to hug me
I just want someone
To talk to
A shoulder to cry on
Someone to help me through
I just want some
To be there for me
That i can trust in
Someone to care about me
I just need someone
To be my friend
To help me through this
Til the very end
© Copyright 2003 becky dudley - All Rights Reserved
kadafi09
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since 2003-06-17
Posts 143
California, United States
1 posted 2003-06-17 07:04 PM

beautiful poem
i truly feel your cries for a friend
you beautifully conveyed your emotion with your words
great job
topsyturveychick
Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 57
Bris,QLD,Aus
2 posted 2003-06-17 09:19 PM

WOW...A great poem . U really expressed it well. I know how u feel sometimes.  But remember someone somewhere is always thinking of u.
Can't wait to read more of ur poems.

I asked God how much he loved me...
He said this much...
And streched out his arms and Died.

**Sunshine**
LOSTinTHISworld
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since 2003-06-01
Posts 94
canada
3 posted 2003-07-26 08:00 PM

thanx a lot for all your replies
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