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Teen Poetry #6

exit: love enter: hatred

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

0 posted 2003-06-18 09:52 PM

exit: love

love
leaves my blackened soul abandoned
after a shivering shoulder
and thoughts of corruption,
death, and suicide engulfing

enter: hatred

hatred
overwhelmes my every sense
with pure lustuous joy
and pleasurable dispositions
kind to my heart

Song_for_Serenity
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 97
USA

1 posted 2003-07-04 11:09 PM

Hey there! This was a interesting poem. Great style, great flow. I really like it! Have a spiffy day!

~Angela
"Anything less than mad, passionate love is wasting your time...Life has too many mediocre things in it, love shouldn't be one of them..."

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-07-05 05:52 PM

thanx for all the spiffyness, angela.

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2003-07-05 05:54 PM

Welcome to Passions! This was a great first post, the way you wrote it was pretty cool

I'm looking forward to seeing more of you around here

PS> check your email for a special greeting

It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings

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