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Teen Poetry #6

Confined To Myself

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-06-27 04:18 PM

An immense sadness sweeps over me,
As I choke back the tears,
That threaten to drain me.
Thinking off the past,
Wishing I could do it all over,
But knowing I must live with it.
The hole I have dug for myself,
Suddenly seems lonelier than ever,
More vast than I can comprehend.
To simply be ignored seems tragic,
But it’s all I asked for,
Nothing more, nothing less.
I walk outside as the sun beats down,
To find no comfort there either,
Only life unaware of my inner depression.
I realize I’m trapped within this darkness,
So completely black nothing can compare to it,
Not even this growing sadness I feel within.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

1 posted 2003-06-27 04:58 PM

It seems that a lot of your poems are about regret...something that happened in the past ( most likely a relationship ) that you wish you could change. It's sad that they seem so depressing, but you express the feeling VERY well. Good job sweetie!

Love ya!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

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