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Teen Poetry #6

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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-29 11:38 PM

My influence grows steady,
as my hand.
Twisted, lingering thought.
As I go, dreaming,
for my sun to set.

Desire
to wish upon stars I've yet to see.

Still, an orange hue
embraces fire, and
my hands
burn with need.

confusedwriter03
New Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 9
U-S-A! haha

1 posted 2003-06-29 11:59 PM

I like it honestly and i figured i could read yours in return for readin mine

but i am young...and LEARNING so may i ask...what is it that you need?

~*~Krista~*~
~*~Im always confused about life~*~

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

2 posted 2003-06-30 02:30 PM

Wow...

The wonderful thing about it is that it doesn't have to be what one certain person needs. It's however the reader takes it... when I read it, my 'need' comes to mind immediately... whatever is your passion, your life...

Wonderful poem, Kaoru... absolutely amazing.

-Lioness

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