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Otaku
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since 2002-08-13
Posts 39
Western Australia
0 posted 2003-07-19 07:28 AM

Hint of sweat,
Blood-thickened veins,
Fixed, focussed eyes,

The Fox is ready to kill.
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Peeps-Peter
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 14
1 posted 2003-07-19 03:28 PM

I liked it, it was scary. Short but effective.
~Peeps
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