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Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

0 posted 2003-08-05 02:08 PM

      When I am alone,
        I remenise in our memories.
          Each and every one,
            Rolls a tear down my cheek.

   Especially when you last put your arms around me,
     Inside I felt a thousand knives slowly
                 Cutting my skin.

         The way you looked into my eyes,
            Made me feel so comfortably lost,
              As
                 I
                   Gazed
                         Into
                              Yours.

        Remembering how wonderful it felt,
         Laying beside you, hearing your heart beat.
          Missing each time,
           You told me how beautiful I am,
            Recieving a kiss from you.

         In my dreams,
          Those moments play over and over again.
           Your hand, gently holding mine,
            Your kiss that I couldnt resist.

           Spending my nights,
            Wishing that you'd be there,
             Holding me in your arms.

        Missing you,
                     Wanting you,
                                  Crying over you.

* A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey *

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

1 posted 2003-08-05 03:38 PM

Oh delaney, this aches big time...oooh like being stabbed right in the heart.

i know this very well, and you did indeed describe it very well.

hugs to you.

love gem

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

2 posted 2003-08-06 01:26 AM

I know EXACTLY how ya feel. Honestly, I'm goin' through the same thing right now. It hurts badly but over time the pain slowly subsides. I hope better times for you! Great write, I enjoyed this! So I can read it again in the future, I'm gonna put it in my library! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

3 posted 2003-08-06 02:44 AM

i like how you structure you poems. pain sucks feel better and keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

4 posted 2003-08-06 03:29 PM

Aww, thanks you guys. Im glad that you liked it!!! Im better now...For many reasons! hehehe.
luv ya peoples *muah*

* A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey *

Jaime

Registered

Member
Posts 250

5 posted 2003-08-06 03:38 PM

Beautiful. Honest. Bare.

I like how this is lacking the tricks of pride. You're stating very openly how you feel.

the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

jaime.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

6 posted 2003-08-07 12:46 PM

It's hard to grow up and watch your friends remain in the same mindset that you left them in

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

7 posted 2003-08-07 09:31 PM

i know how u feel.the pain sometimes seems so unbearable but we all get thru it somehow thats the comforting part!

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

8 posted 2003-08-08 05:05 PM

Yeah, that is comforting, Im pretty sure I got thru it. plus, right now, Im too happy to b sad. so I guess Im occupying my saddness with happiness. feh, its all good!

* A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey *

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