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Teen Poetry #6

Lifes Party

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2003-08-10 01:20 PM

Parties hopping,
Puked from drinks,
Went home stoned,
Mom asks questions,
Truths unknown.
Lifes like a party,
Wake up and forget,
Whos that next to you?

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

1 posted 2003-08-11 02:34 AM

thats great! To think all that excitment stole my 3 closest friends. Good poem liked it alot

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

2 posted 2003-08-11 10:07 AM

So true, I especially liked the last line, brought some humor that is actually very true. nice work

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

3 posted 2003-08-11 10:11 PM

Thanks for all your guy's replys to my poem it means a lot to me

-ash

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

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