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Teen Poetry #6

Bottled Innocence

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

0 posted 2003-08-16 02:06 PM

if only you could know
the black line that separates me from the world
if you could capture my bottled innocence..
take a sip and then behold
a portrait of my untainted life.

its short and i wish i had more to put there but its kinda directed at someone so i can't really add to it its got an implied subject if you know what i mean?

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-08-16 04:06 PM

wow. amazing. I know what you mean about not being able to add to what you write. It seems like what you have here says it perfectly. I too am an innosent.

Great poem.

[This message has been edited by Lexy (08-16-2003 04:07 PM).]

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