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Teen Poetry #6

mars

poetik_punk
New Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 8

0 posted 2003-08-29 02:59 PM

Mars
Tonight Mars came into my view
And so did a thousand visions of you
We talked for a little while by phone
Could you tell that I feel alone

I sit here and I think about only you
And it’s hard but some how it’ll do
My eyes are filled with tears and my heart sorrow
And I can only hope I see the light tomorrow

I’ll wake up tomorrow morning
Hoping that I’ll no longer be mourning
I’ve lost you and I can no longer see
That man that I used to call me

Tonight mars came into my view
And tonight I said I missed you
And you didn’t even reply
So now I sit here and I cry

Tonight mars came into my view
And tonight I said that I loved you
You didn’t reply
And now I want to die

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2003-08-30 02:59 AM

heh i feel the same when my adam is in oregon and i am in reno it's hard. don't give up dear ya know i love ya jimmy!
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-08-30 03:03 PM

mmmm...interesting, touching, sad. I loved this. Excellent write.

Alnilam
Member

since 2003-07-04

Posts 75

3 posted 2003-09-01 08:16 PM

ouch. why another person would do that is beyond me, and yet its been happening to me for a month now. mars is beautiful, but mars with someone you love is better.

and good luck in your situation

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

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