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Teen Poetry #6

The Stream

*Dark Princess*
Junior Member

since 2003-04-13

Posts 22
lost in the shadows

0 posted 2003-09-16 12:12 PM

Confusion in my head,
running constantly like a stream.
When the storms come,
the confusion flows over the banks.
Too much to flow between the shores.
Exploding into a flood of anger and pain.

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

1 posted 2003-09-17 11:13 PM

I like this, tho I feel it doesn't seem done maybe you could work on it..maybe not

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

[This message has been edited by Match (09-17-2003 11:14 PM).]

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